And worse, you don't want to bring out a sense of competition in a man—that is the most anti-romantic thing you can do!I am not suggesting that you dumb down your accomplishments or not be yourself, but this is only for the profile.The first thing Amy needed to know is what single men are looking for in a woman and then adjust her profile to reflect these qualities.
So, she put her data analysis background to work and figured out how to improve her results and, ultimately, find a husband.
Instead create sentences that give a true feeling of who you are.
For example, "One of the most fun trips I've taken was white water rafting on the Colorado River—that was so exciting!
" instead of "My friends say I'm adventurous and I like to travel."6. Make the profile conversational so it seems like you are talking to the reader to encourage men to read further and become more interested.
But be careful with humor—it's not as easy to pull off as you might think and can backfire.(Sometimes what you thought of as witty, comes across as snarky).7.